 poetic abortion 2006-08-10 . chapter 1"His warm rough hands Leave red marks and this is Notwhereiwanttogo" - Powerful stanza in itself. I love the "notwhereiwanttogo" in particular, very creative and just: Oh. My. GOD, howcanyouhititsodeadon!
Also, the last stanza is particualrly strikin.
Powerful, terror-filled and just so . . . it makes me feel terrible. Lovely, just so lovely.
~* Noelle |