This is very good. I am sure that you are a wonderful writer.

Wow, this is a very powerful poem. It has many emotions that come out too. This is a great poem, good job on this. Keep writing forever and always. please R&R me sometime.

Tainted Morning Sun

"His warm rough hands Leave red marks and this is Notwhereiwanttogo" - Powerful stanza in itself. I love the "notwhereiwanttogo" in particular, very creative and just: Oh. My. GOD, howcanyouhititsodeadon!

Also, the last stanza is particualrly strikin.

Powerful, terror-filled and just so . . . it makes me feel terrible. Lovely, just so lovely.

* Noelle