| Reviews for Cold Air |
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Evangelizationiscoming 2/23/07 . chapter 1This is very good. I am sure that you are a wonderful writer. |
Not Quite Dry Eyed 8/11/06 . chapter 1Wow, this is a very powerful poem. It has many emotions that come out too. This is a great poem, good job on this. Keep writing forever and always. please R&R me sometime. Tainted Morning Sun |
poetic abortion 8/10/06 . chapter 1"His warm rough hands Leave red marks and this is Notwhereiwanttogo" - Powerful stanza in itself. I love the "notwhereiwanttogo" in particular, very creative and just: Oh. My. GOD, howcanyouhititsodeadon! Also, the last stanza is particualrly strikin. Powerful, terror-filled and just so . . . it makes me feel terrible. Lovely, just so lovely. * Noelle |