"Audrey Hephburn smile" - Such a pretty line, really. Love it.

The first stanza is amazinf also, very well written and hooking and interesting way of starting a poem; really, quite amazing.

Nicely done. :)

~* Noelle

Amazing imagery and such wonderful descriptions that leave just enough to the imagination.

"Audrey Hepburn smile, silly girl won't betray" is just an adorable line that is refreshing.

And the end. The pleading, it's just a perfect end.