This is great. Your way with words is awesome. I love the "women's suffer(age)ing" line. That is such a great play on words. The last line has some fantastic images. Great work. Keep writing! :)

I don't know how to end poems for my life. Or ** about poetry, but as ** amusing and good the ideas are, this needs something. On a more normal note i loved the bitter bits that said ** you.

This was really good- I enjoyed it.

I really like the contrast between nature and man made creation(or just nature vs. man)...it is a subject I love to read about.

I also like your allusion to pop icons and society ideals...especially the line "And our Paris Hilton dress-ups agree//we need to end//women's suffer(age)ing" I thought that line was perfect.

Good job.