Good poem. Nice title.

~Twilight Starr~

I think you have a gift for capturing pieces of the world very subtly. I can't help but think of celebrities when I read this. Very well-executed and very sharp.

this is beautiful ... it reminds me of those people who sit alone at cafes at you wonder what they're doing there ... i wish i could write like this ...

Wow.

It's so short but holds so much meaning. Great use of parenthese "tea(rs)" without seeming forced or overdone.

Beautiful language and imagery.