Reviews for Never Give It Up - FictionPress.com

Nemonus 2007-04-20 ch 1,	The last line is interesting, but the rest seems overlong and a bit stiff. Not bad.
Neverlander12 2006-12-06 ch 1,	Frickin amazing. It was paranoid until the end where it just...I don't know, blossomed. Those last two lines were perfect. It was altogether a wonderful piece. Smooches-Wizzy
Delirium Batharie 2006-10-10 ch 1,	This would make a pretty song to hum along to in your room, alone, crouched in the corner... Kudos to you! I suggest you find a melody~~and you're set.
White-Dragon-Goddess 2006-10-06 ch 1,	It was irrelevant, however, I felt like saying it. It was an idea that beat the back of my head until I had written it down in the middle of the night. Its just like old fantasy stories that old people tell, thats all. Don't let me misguide anyone... I'm no writer. I'm just fooling around. Interesting poem by the way...Sounds like Golem. ^-^
Alteng 2006-09-06 ch 1,	I am not poetically inclined! So, this review is not much. I like the ending of it, and the repetition of the "for it". It kind of reminds me of Hunter in a way, especially where I have left him.
KylieMcMahon 2006-08-10 ch 1,	Love the tone~ its got a good rythm too~ kylie :)