Reviews for I wanted a song - FictionPress.com

QTgirly 2006-11-05 ch 1,	WOW WOW WOW... what more can I say? This was just beautiful! It reached out and grabbed me. This is beautifully worded and really captures a sereal mood and wraps you up into this 'relationship' and captivates your attention. Very inspirint and intruiging, though if any ordinary person read this they would be confused; but for a writer, this is perfect!
Pandaemonic Paradigm 2006-08-11 ch 1,	Somewhat unique, I like it. "We weren't a silver leaved tree." was random, though, and didn't really seem to fit. And no, it wasn't an error. "The seaweed drifts on endless." I used a lot of the same language used in the book.