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| Countess Chocula 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuse"and adorned in teh symbols of his band, though his only weapons were empty hands," that's my favorite part. Love it so much. |
| C David Edwards 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseWhat an excellent viewpoint! I do very little poetry reading, but when I do, I like it to be concise, just like this. I'd try to offer you some criticism, but there doesn't seem to be any need at all. |
| J.Dem 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI liked that a lot, the person describing the soldier seems deep and filled with knowledge and political angst. Please R&R J.Dem |