Nice ending paragraph. Brilliant poem.

~Twilight Starr~

i love the gruesome feeling to this poem.

The mordancy is very compelling and I couldn't help but smile at the last line. You paint a very accurate picture of our world, I think, with this poem. It is both smooth and hard, filled with fads and false words and too many easy fashion statements and people who do think it's gorgeous to wear their heart on their sleeve and spill their problems on national TV, for fifteen minutes of fame. It's a macabre image, but, in some ways, a lovely one.

That is a very good point:P Wearing your heart on your sleave is just messy. In more ways then one:P

This was wonderful! The sarcasm, and the "Thrusting out your insides"-fantastic! I love it!

Heh, I like this one. Short, packs a punch, and the last line is so catty and wonderful. I'm glad I found this. Keep writing! :)

I like the sarcasm toward just another saying "your heart on your sleeve" and how you give it a much more cryptic meaning.

Great poem. :)

Awesome. I'm definately adding it to my favorites.