I don't think I like this story...

Mainly because Julian killed himself in the end.

Well... that is the reason why I hate this story.

So I am going to rewrite that part in my mind and they live together happily ever after.

The end.

That was shocking and depressing and frankly a bit sadistic. I wouldn't have had a problem with the ending, except for the fact that I can't see a clear reason why he would still want to kill himself. I mean, his original reason was because he 'had nowhere to go and was sick of it all', but now he had Jake (he seemed pretty happy with him), and a nice place to live (thus, he has a place to go). I guess he was just faking happiness the entire time?

Oh well, I guess I'm just not a fan of shocker endings. I like closure...like, I would love to read what the note said, to get a feel for why he did it.

Oh gosh, I'm still crying :(
That was sad..and well...I just love how you made Julian.
Very sad really..

Well, that was sweet, and morbid, and amazing. I really loved this one. I like it when they don't end happily, it's genera;;y more realistic this way. Very sad, very well done.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

oh my god this was awful, but in a really really good way. amazing. how sad for jacob.

I'm an idiot, this is complete... Sorry for the stupid question!!

Hey! I really like this story! Just wondering, though, is the story over?

:O HOW COULD YOU!? Everything was looking up...that's so sad! *cries*

...But it was still very good! All of it was cute, and then BAM, you get us all with the ending. Very sadistic...I like it. XD Great job!

BUH WHY?! NO!

What the... why did he... damn.
But I really like your style^^

You led me to believe that everything was going to be alright. Everything would be happily ever after. I can't believe Julian was so selfish! He made Jake fall in love with him, and then he goes and kills himself!

OH MY GOD I HATE ENDINGS LIKE THAT...but I liked the story lol It was great ^^ Julian was cool

That is so so sad. I almost wish I hadn't read it.

What! WHAT! What the- what is wrong with you! I'm crying my eyes out. What on earth was the point of all that?! Good grief I can't stop sobbing.

woah... almost made me cry... i thought he was getting... better or wutever.. i thought he wuz happier and maybe... well... it came a bit out of nowhere! kisses them policewoman... omg...