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Hehe, I found the bad review funny... I hope it was meant to too, because then I'm not losing my sanity from insomnia...

No wonder this is a popular story, it's got that little glint in the corner of your eye and besides the characters I've met so far are very interesting. I'm having this weird image of Zander looking a little like Zelos. You can bet I'll be back to read other chapters later but right now I need coffee. Otherwise I can't win this bet.

BRAINS

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Oops, what I meant to say was:

COFE

Hey, you updated, nice. I really enjoyed the drama in this chap, very well done. Huge shock with Klein and Valleye being related and um... I look forward to more tracks!

Haha. This is pretty interesting. Zander, er, Derzan- whomever- is probably one of the most amusing characters I've seen on FictionPress lately. XD Keep writing.

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Cool story!

I like it, very interesting... I hope to continue as soon as I can _

Wow... how long is this going to run? I just realized that you JUST got finished introducing all of the characters...

Anyway, awesome new characters, can't wait to see what sort of crap they'll dig themselves into next!

I love how this dude is constantly at odds with himself. And the story does kinda play out like an anime in my head as I'm reading :-) It's especially amusing how Alina interacts with her invisible boyfriend, although it does seem like she occasionally needs to be reminded that Yuumi is there. I wonder if she talks to him when nobody is around?

Just what I need, another anime to get hooked on... :-P

Hey, it's me. As a sardonic manic-depressive, I had to check out your info before I misjudged you. You're actually a pretty good writer- I like the way you narrated it. So few writers use an adaptation of your style for fear of grammar issues. And I REALLY do appreciate your input, as it was true. I'm an angry person and I needed to hear it. You should check out my other stuff though, as it may sway you. In the meantime, I will be filing through you writings. Nice to know someone out there's honest.-Manic/CREATE

Your characters are just perfect... I love this story! Really, I know I might sound overly enthusiastic, but the story is entertaining and funny as hell. Great work; I'm really excited to read the next chapter.

Pure freakin energy, man... you have a real talent for creating unique and fun characters. Sydni really just grabbed my attention... and proceeded to hug and strangle it into submission. Nice work, although you meed to separate your dialogue - sometimes I'm not really sure who's talking.

It has a good story line but I agree with another one of your reviews, It's a little confusing, to say the least. It just needs a tiny bit of work. :)

Ehe... This was a funny chapter. All of them are still loony, though. -_-'

Okay, so update soon, k? No pressure there. Just a reminder. I like this story! _

This is getting crazier! XD

Okay, I'm liking this story. Even if the characters are all a bit crazy. (A bit?)

Hm.. Maybe you should try adding someone to the cast who's not demented? To neutralize the story somehow, and keep it from getting too loco. XD

Keep up the good work, dude!

Hey! Now this is something I don't see everyday... Main character with a split personality? Hm. Cool.. Add the fact that's its gonna be a harem story. Loco.

This chapter was a good start, but the dialogue isn't that well put off. I don't know, it's confusing or something. And it's not really well laid. Well, you could maybe work on that...

But still, this one's really interesting. I'll keep out an eye for this! Next chapter now

The character of Oriana is intriguing. I can't wait to find out what her story is- all of the characters', really. I really liked Zander in this chapter, too. Nice job. _