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| Xerophyte 2006-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseThis is very, very different and very, very interesting. As a vampire loving Jew, I was kind of attracted to this story. You write very well, and I think that the religious aspect will become an interesting side conflict. I hope you write more! Your grammar is excellent. Pansexuality is an intersting concept. As a bisexual (I hate that word), I find it similar to how I feel. Hmm. Interesting... |
| Legato-Love 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseMon dieu! You have combined my two favorite topics-vampires and judaism! This is too long to read on the computer; I will print it out... I see that it is of good quality, and shall review it ASAP. Good God, you are even my age. And you speak French?!? Forgive me... I am simply beside myself right now. *adds to author alert list* |