That was beautifully written, I teared up a bit at the end. I wish you would've included more of Kris' emotions though. Good job, though!

Oh...my...gosh
This story is the best story I've read so far on Fiction Press.
Its beautiful and tear-jerking.

When you said unthinkable I thought you meant abortion. Dead seems like such an extreme for that situation. You really got to me in the last sentence when the mom said "I would have understood" I really liked that ending.

OMG so sad...but a good piece of fiction.

Aww! That's so touching.

Excellent work, I'll be reading more of yours!

_R&R my novel EARTHSTONES, please!

Aww that was sad :( and short. A little more detail could have been added. But good job :]

Oh my god! That was so sad! I got al teary eyed and everything. I wish you put more detail into it though, show more emotion. All I got was that Kris was sad and didn't know what to do, when she was probably depressed and devastated you know? I think you should revise and edit this and put it back up so I can read again. Cheers!

I think if you went more in depth with this it would be even better. I really liked it, but it went too fast. Maybe give some background information on Kris? Possibly explain why she killed herself instead of getting abortion? The ending was good, however. I like it when things like that happen.

Amaya