I love this story! It's amazing.. please continue it... it wi more than amazing and the main character is incredibly easy for me to relate to... anyways.. i'm done.

I love it!
-Chloe

this is so great mak more!

i disagree with ebonydragon. i liked it. i reckon that the fact she's kinda scared of guys gives it that air of mystery. for all i kno it COULD be something other than just teasing. great so far. keep updating

Yeah! I like him. I'm sorry, I don't like to critique but...she just seems a little too scared of guys. Something other than just teasing should amke her hate them. Anyways, overall, you have a wonderful story and I hope you keep updating!