can't wait for more

Yay!! Go you!! Putting stuff up for the world to see!!This is cool. Hope to see more.xxp.s grateful rather than greatful

Thats so cool, my name Shayla, too.

This is really good. I'm very interested in seeing how the relationship between Kai and Shayla develops. Please continue soon.

I love this story it had me laughing. The whole concept is great. Can't wait to read some more. Great descriptions and action scenes. The story is written beautifully. :)