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| controv3rsyxx 2006-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseyour use of words is good. very emotional, but i didn't really get the last part. sorry if i'm a lil' bit slow .. but did the narrator kill himself? what happened? besides all that, i thought this was pretty good. |
| Rachizzle 2006-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuse;_; OMG... Amazing, you are. |
| Frore 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseVery pretty, and very sad. My favorite variety of story. |
| Amaya Yamaki 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was sad, but I liked it a lot. You describe things well. Amaya |