this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.

I love it. A few slight mistakes on the first chapter, I think, but other then that, its great!

I am formerly krimsoknight this chap does make thimg easer but it was still funny when he got hit in the gogo's and ternd in to a crab

DarkFox: Another good chapter X3 update soon!

Shadow Wolf: Yeah, update soon.

it's pretty good so far. The first chapter got kinda confusing with the introduction of so many characters so fast so I got sorta lost...
anyway, the prologue was a little unbelievable (try adding some more detail to flesh it out a bit more?) and more details to the characters and surroundings too might help. The story also kinda went really quickly, I don't know if that was just me or not. Great job so far, the plot is pretty interesting, keep up the good work!

Ha Ha Ha! that's funny when he got kicked in the gut and ternd in to a krab cant wait for the next chapter

wow that relly stinks that the vilige bernt to the ground

Haha! Very nice man, sorry it took me awhile to review this chapter. One thing though, you misspelled 'rough' (you had it as 'ruff') You know I'm bad about spelling.
Overall, nice as always

DarkFox: Oh, thank you. I'm fairly good at drawing yes, but there is still a lot of people better than me. My main goal is to either get as good as or surpass (which I doubt will happen) my brother X3 He's an awesome artist though he doesn't draw quite as much as I do, but when I get a compliment on my art from him it means a lot!! XD anyway, now for my story comment n.n'

Another good chapter! update soon!! X3

Shadow Wolf: Yes... I'm actually interested in seeing what happens next also...

DarkFox: O.O wow... it's hard getting him interested in stories... good job!

Cute! So...Kitsune is a Kitsune?
Awesome! I love this story so far!

DarkFox: Hey... he's kinda like my character (for me), I just have 1 tail and I'm... taller than one foot... If you want you can check it out on DeviantART dot com... eh, just a suggestion

Hi! A friend of mine suggested that I read this. I really like it soo far! Update soon!

hello...my name is Heari...i like ur story it's interesting it kinda reminds me of Ranma 1/2. well um...update!

I like this story! It's funny. If you want a piece of advice, you could clean up a bit with spelling and grammar.

Gah! I told you someone would point out the random burning down of the village!Funny stuff though man.