Babe, you're amazing! I love how the italicized part was also the end. This is a gorgeous poem, pulchritudinous AND meaningful.

Yes. May your words be. Bring peace.

Effective - change from bold to italic.

Wow... I liked that. I think you might have a few spelling errors. Might want to give it another look-over. Looking good!

This poem's very unique, I don't recall many poems on this site using such an interesting format for your poem. It's so creative how you put the sweet, repetitive words (kind of like a chorus) in italics at the centre, and the raw, emotional lines in bolded letters on the side. I like that a lot. And in general, it was well-written, I like how raw the emotions were portrayed, very deep. Great job, keep up the good work!

I find that most poems written about poetry, the writing of it, or those who write it turn out, well, not good. In this case I have been proven wrong. This is a gorgeous piece of work and you are some poet, which is even more evident in that you put this poetry under the heading of war. I agree, it is sometimes like a war with words, whether it be you against yourself, the words, or the rest of the world. Beautious.