I really like this one, you never know who people truly are.

Oh.. I like this one. It's short and concise and simple. At the same time though, even though you're comparing their costumes and masks with hiding their true selves at this masquerade, this applies to real life too. Maybe this entire poem is a metaphor? Good stuff, keep it up.

Really nice ^^ And I agree.. everyone has a hidden face/personality behind smiles... beautifully written and vivid imagery. X

I like this poem. It brings about a good message/idea, someone to get the reader thinking. The descriptions are pretty good, it was nicely written. In general, it was good.

hey Win, i like this one...it kinda reminds me of brandon.:tears: that bastard! o well good job