This is really good. It reminds me of the TITANIC lolz

the first lines rule... this is great

hahahahaha

i agree

with your summary.

my death freak friend

felling morbud? -)

great poem, though

WHOA!... great!

Great piece!

Ahh... I love anything that includes dark images. Being a serious horror writer myself, I can really appreciate your train of thought. I really liked this poem - great work.