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| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-09-12 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome story! Wow... suspense... loved it. Every minute I was hoping she'd get away, but once she started remembering her own path, I figured she'd get caught. This needs to be continued! But hey, it's your story, so... yea... amazing. =D Maranwe Telrunya |
| AutumnRain16 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. i think that it makes a really good short story. it gives just enough information. I like the descriptions and the stories behind the characters. It would be interesting maybe to write short stories that explained a more in-depth history about the other members of the gangs. |
| Kaggr 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseWeird...I like it though. Seems like something me and Kanna would do. Go in and delete police files...Yes, I could imagine that. Just like I can imagine all three of us in a jail cell, with me and Kanna saying we should do it again while picking the lock, and you just hiding in the back, away from the two insane jailbreakers. xD |