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| dustytiger 2006-08-18 ch 1,  | abusethis is really good... i like the kind of manic way it was wirtten because it really works for the theme, you're right it's subtle but it gets across what it is you feel being sick, great work |
| invisibleandhopeless 2006-08-12 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. It was very real and very personal. Just the way poetry should be. Poetry is a reflection of reality and truth. Truth is always personal. I really think you did a good job. |