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| Kohlomere 2006-09-11 ch 24,   | That's it? Honestly, I expected more. The ending let me down. I'm sorry, E. |
| RevolutionIsMyName 2006-09-11 ch 24, | Oh, the end! I was sad to see it end! But you know, all good things end eventually. I'm glad to see it was Iain who told her to write the story - that was cute. Anyway, it was a excellent story, and I'll definitely be reading you next one! |
| BroadwayStar-2 2006-09-11 ch 24, | *pouts* It's over? NO! I LOVE THIS STORY, IT CAN'T BE OVER! |
| pearlwalrus 2006-09-11 ch 24, | I really enjoyed the majority of your story, the characters were well developed as the text progressed, a clear depiction of the time of setting and not to many gramatical or spelling mistakes! well done. Although(i supposed there is always a catch!) if you reflect from the end of the text the plot line didnt truely seem to have a purpose, it seemed like, in chapter 23 that the story would continue, it rather abrubtly finished, a disapointment to say the least! it would have been more of an ejoyable read if something such as Sarah had fallen for William after he had returned from the war or him dying instead of just being broken. Speaking of William his character, because of the abrupt completion lacked a resolution. Despite the few critizisms this story truely had potential, an enjoyable read! 4 stars! well done.ThanksPW |
| Kohlomere 2006-09-10 ch 23, | That was terrific! Oh my, don't keep me in suspense. Please update soon, E. |
| Angelic Brunette Hermione 2006-09-10 ch 23, | Argh. I should know by now that the wonderful happenings of the last two chapters weren't meant to last for long. Good job, btw! ABH |
| BroadwayStar-2 2006-09-10 ch 23, | He's changed? Oh no! |
| Kirsten Nussey 2006-09-10 ch 23, | Aw that was such a sad ending to a wonderful chapter. I'm interested to see where Sarah's relationships with both Iain and William go now they're both there... she seemed pretty reluctant to tell William about her engagment. What are her feelings for him? |
| RevolutionIsMyName 2006-09-09 ch 22, | Ahh, William is coming home! I knew he wasnt dead!! Oh, and everyone is getting married and having babies and what not - how wonderful! But somehow I get the feeling that something bad is going to happen. I hope not. Well, anyway, until the next chapter. |
| BroadwayStar-2 2006-09-09 ch 22, | He's ALIVE! YAY! |
| Angelic Brunette Hermione 2006-09-09 ch 22, | Huzzah! Huzzah! I knew William was alive. Praised be! ABH |
| Angelic Brunette Hermione 2006-09-09 ch 21, | *Sighs serenely* Yup, things are certainly right in Sarah's world! This was a great chapter. ABH |
| Kirsten Nussey 2006-09-09 ch 22, | Yay he's alive! I'm so happy for Sarah :D |
| Kirsten Nussey 2006-09-08 ch 21, | Wow! Omg... Sarah and Iain to be married... why do I get the feeling that this might not run so smoothly...? |
| BroadwayStar-2 2006-09-08 ch 21, | Going to a chapel and we're gonna get married! Aw, how sweet, please update soon! |