Reviews for Papa's Got A Brand New Bag

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Green Eyed Pixie 2007-12-13 ch 11,	abuseawesome. hope you update soon and haven't given up on this.
munchiekins 2007-09-06 ch 4,	abuseAlmost kisses are sexy! :) " is all that rolls off my tongue, quite articulate, but all the same." I love that line. I know someone who is like that. It's amusing to listen to him. I like your style of writing O_O I'm new to FictionPress & your fic is the first I've come across but still I feel that the way you write is very unique. Articulate (as mentioned before [points at quote]) but gritty too. Maybe it's the cuss words :P
munchiekins 2007-09-06 ch 2,	abuseRiley gets naked but he doesn't get laid. I like that xD
hg 2007-06-09 ch 6, anon.	abuseoh man, just have to put in a little comment... exactly same circumstaces at a party a few years back, and the exact same conversation. it started as hitler with only one nut, and it was chicks talking about lesbianism. man... flashback of the freaky kind. Too close to reality.
merrymowmow 2007-03-07 ch 11,	abuseI was wondering when you're going to update.
Ben Wuest 2007-01-26 ch 11,	abuseGod, you're still the best. Update soon, yeah? B.
DiSpOsAbLe 2007-01-20 ch 1,	abuseHahaha, I love the relationship between Riley and Dlyan...their such great friends..not! But it's cute, I love that. Also, Dylan seems a wee bit jealous. I was kinda surprised that Riley was into his dad...then I reread the summary and slapped myself on the head for being so stupid. It's...not exactly what I read, but i'm interested. I like the way you write, and if his dad is hot, I know I definetly would read it, wrong or right. I'm a sucker at that.
Mia Hail 2007-01-13 ch 11,	abusehey doll, don't worry about telling me to be good. I know that I've over used that phrase way too much as well, it's understandable. The story is really shapeing up. Lots of subtle things said, and ...stuff happening. I stopped wondering a long time ago why I keep comeing back for more of what you give. ;) (random blurps from me) The Macarena puts me in such a good mood, but it's... strange if you actully listen to it. I mean... the guys wrote it about their niece, and have you ever actully heard what it says you got to wonder... oh well!! keep up the wonderful work. much love and support.
Skyrockets 2007-01-08 ch 11,	abuseWhoa. Imagine my amazement when I sat down this morning (fruity pebbles in hand) and discovered that you had already posted another chapter. I was almost disbelieving. After all, it hasn't been that long...or have I been asleep for months and never knew? But it was certainly a pleasant surprise. It made my morning more than Halle Berry at a nude beach (almost) First thoughts: All right! The sex chapter! However, this only makes me slightly more happy... Saddened that this is not Riley, but intregued and convincing myself this is for the better of the story that we have even more plot and meat. So yay for that! And I've decided this is now my favorite chapter, and I swear it's not just because it's a sex chapter, I have more depth to me than that (just who do you take me for?). I love Dylan. I can't exactly explain in relative terms why; I just do. If he was real, I'd make him mine in an instant (better believe it). But yeah, the chapter was great, writing was great, everything was great, and now I'm just in a great mood. And I also really liked the line you ended with. It conveys a lot right there. So kudos for that, and rah rah rah and stuff. And now, drumroll please; how I broke my fingers: (would you believe I got into a fight? No...I'm not cool enough for that. Nobody wants to fight me...) Turns out I'm not the hot-shot I thought I was. There I was, just chillin' at a skatepark (why? I dunno), and being the show-off that I am, attempted a maneuver I shouldn't have, and fell...majorly. Cracked my head, broke my fingers, bruised my ribs. Oh yeah, it was fun!
NewAgeRembrandt 2007-01-07 ch 11,	abuseSo this chapter is pretty much my favorite now. Probably because I like Dylan so much... or because gay sex makes the world happy. (yes, the ENTIRE world, some people are just in denial) And this chapter HAS helped in my wonderful understanding of Dylan. So I'm happy, as much as I can be after spending so much time in close vicinity with family. And I have veggie burgers (because really, what am I going to do with tampons?) and a character named Jon who is spicy. Spicy as in doesn't seem care. As in he has the potential to be evil. And evil is sexy. There's a lot of metaphor in this chapter. I thought that was pretty nifty of you. Or, well, it appeared to have metaphor. It could've just been the drugs. (Could you imagine ** Yesterday/NewAgeRembrandt babies?) Hey, I may be a confusing Juliet, but you're a doubly confusing Romeo. You give me what I want (Dylansex and Morganhappy) but you twist it in you're evil, lovely ways (noRiley and..um... noSuperCuteMysteryMan/WomanInMorgan'sLife). Oh the pain! I'm liking mapletreesap. Next time I don't, but really do, cry, I'll make sure to say nothing except "mapletreesap". Hopefully I've made your pants ECSTATIC with my battery-powered goodness. You know what they say... "Update soon".
Gaki Toki 2007-01-06 ch 11,	abuseI love how vague and secretive you are about this. It makes me like it so much more. I lost my shoes...damn...haha. Anyways, yummy boys. Me=Hoping for more soon.
Kian 2007-01-06 ch 11, anon.	abuseSo I guess it's more than just for drugs, huh? We'll I kinda expected something like this but it still makes me think less of Dylan... hm... and there's the fact that he's a junkie... Thanks
debmaankis 2007-01-06 ch 11,	abuseLet me guess... Dylan.
magalina 2007-01-06 ch 11,	abuseNice chapter. I feel sorry for Dylan now... Update soon!
Kimi504 2007-01-04 ch 10,	abuseNice, I like how you put his rambling cause that really happens alot. And about that whole month since updating thing, I actually was looking through my alerts yesterday thinking about how long since some of them have updated, then today I get on my e-mail and I se half of the stories have updated today! O.O talk about great mind think alike! ^^

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