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| go spin circles 2008-06-09 ch 1,  | abusemfiqe[wqeasdfgh. Sorry, that was me melting into a pile of goo on my keyboard. That was lovely! I really adore your writing style. It's just so beautiful. There's really no other way to describe it. Thank you so much for sharing this. |
| vanishedhope 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abusethe story is so beautifully written..made my cry... |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written piece. It made me cry! Great job. Congrats on a gorgeous story. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Sa-Sa Spice 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abuseAw... I wanna cry.. |
| Core Satiated 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely brilliant. Other than a broken heart and a lump in my throat, this story did nothing for me, really. Seriously, though, this has to be one of the most creative and heartfelt pieces that I have read on fiction press. Personalities painted perfectly, storyline flowed wonderfully, ending was heart-wrenching and beautifully done. A perfect story. |
| A little birdie once told m... 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseI have goosebumps. This is flawless. Wow. I don't think this review will be helpful or critiquing you in any way. Just know that this was amazing, and I have chills. Perfect. |
| ess3sandra 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abusefreakishly good story. naked language, cuts deep and gets sugarcotet by the numbers. |
| Luma 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseoh my...this was amazingly sweet and horribly sad. I couldn't stop reading. I adore it, every word. You are very talented. Keep writing, yeah. -L. |
| vocecara 2007-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg. i thought it would have a nice cheesy happy ending. but.. ouch. :( |
| its.Nothing.Special 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abuseBeautifulbeautifulbeautifulbeautifulbeautiful. Enchanting. Wonderfully written. I wish I could marry this. :)) I l-o-v-e-d the incorporation of the numbers. You stayed specific and consistent. ..But did you multiply 20,160 minutes by 14 to get that other big number? I think that's what you did, but I'm not sure. Though wouldn't you multiply it by 60 to get the number of seconds in two weeks? :3 Anyways, I still loved it. And I still want to marry it. [It didn’t change the memorial service as she laid a bouquet of flowers (she didn’t count how many) on his grave, the sun burning holes into her black dress, eyes weary from the drainage of an ocean (another approximation) down her arms, across her legs, through the cracks of her bedroom floor.] LOVED THAT. You repeated that "down her legs, across her arms" thing from the beginning, but "across the sky" is so much more hopeful than "the cracks of her bedroom floor." I loved the way you showed the change in her personality with and without her (sweetsweetsweetsweet) guy. It made me sad when she didn't count anymore. :( Definitely a fave. This was amazing. Keep writing! ;)becky |
| VELVETxKISSES 2007-03-04 ch 1, | abusethis is great, then again, you always are. |
| morethancarbon 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseI adore this... I like the whole number thing. It adds a lot of structure to the story. |
| Daughter of the Faeries 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseWow...this is amazing. I don't really know what to say. Usually I try to give some constructive criticism, but I can't think of any. Amazing, wonderful work! |
| Unwritten Lies 2006-11-12 ch 1, | abuseWow, I love this... |
| Elidhu 2006-11-03 ch 1, | abuseWow...it's just so...wow. Heart felt it's so deep and beautiful. It's not something I would usually read but the ending almost made me cry. It hasn't got much description but that's why it's so effective. I love it. XBethX |