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Reviews For: Within The Sands Of Time

scotti
2006-08-22
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good! Your descriptive ability is unmatched... I'm a bit envious. I wish I possessed such talent. My favorite line is "...the fire of the full moon glowed.." You have given warmth and passion to something most people would describe and consider cool to the touch. You have peeked my curiosity with the characters and I would love to read more of the story. Please continue on!
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