Reviews for I Feel A Sin Coming On

Maris. S 2006-08-14 ch 1,	abuseI love the way that you wrote this love! It's great :)
Skyrockets 2006-08-14 ch 1,	abuseWhoa. Disturbing. Very, very disturbing. But yet, you can do no wrong. Even disturbing is good. It made me laugh (okay, not laugh, since I would wake someone up, but it made me smile and want to laugh real bad). The images were definetly vivid. Your style is definetly original. Not many people I know who write poems about map-** and pimple fetishes. It's awesome though. Seriously. I love it. Keep it up. Plus, I totally agree that sex is like being at sea and not wanting to go back to shore. All in all, the entire thing was very entertaining, well done, and enjoyable.
dreamshell 2006-08-12 ch 1,	abuseI just have to review after reading this; "I could always drill a hole in your head and pour soda pop in it." Nice Dahmer reference there. Besides that, this was an interesting sadistic love poem. Gotta love those. Kind of feels more like a story than a poem. Well-written, and the concept does kind of catch the eye.