lol..the play of words was so freaking good..lol

"You my red lacquered thing.Love is a singeing, many-scarred thing."

This is my favorite line~

Bahahahahaha. I only realized what you were talking about in the end. Silly me.

"My hole’s twitching like an eye, like we’ve all got something to be nervous about." - Hahahahaha! Its so disturbingly poetic! I love how its insightful despite its obvious shock factor, hahahahaha.

Magnificent. Teehee.

Cordially,Jake

There's something oddly appealing about these odd, complex [macabre] stories you write. There's a rolling aspect to it, a rhythm.