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| McQuinn 2006-08-12 ch 1,   | Wow. *Clears throat.* Well, that was unexpected to say the least. First, I must say that I like the brevity of this. Most stories like this drag on and on with their descriptions of the feelings and characters and settings, but you don't. The way you described everything was short and sweet (and, of course, hot). The ending was very dark, and it had chills running up my spine. I asked myself if this actually happens, and it probably does. Bravo, you've earned yourself browny points for scaring the ** out of me. Just a little, though. The reference to arsenic and lace reminded me of "Arsenic and Old Lace," the movie. Just a little tidbit. ;p Good job. -McQuinn |
| RACHIZZLEOMGILOVEYOU 2006-08-12 ch 1, | Okay, so Rachizzle is my real name on here I just never login... in case you didn't know. AND OMG! As I just told my friend Katy...(SerialXLain) Chinamagusa Bara (1:26:01 AM): that's like the only person besides you who has ever really NOTICED me FORREALS other than just review replies XD Lol! So, yeah thanks for noticing.. haha. One of these days I plan to read everything... literally everything you've read if I haven't already. I've just been kind of busy lately. SO! This one was so sweet in that kinky sex, death kind of way. And yeah, I just took that from your warning&contents thingy. :P I'll email you RIGHT NOW! ^_^ |
| SerialXLain 2006-08-12 ch 1, | Whoa... O.o I found that incredibly sexy...and morbid...oh yeah and: sexy. XD I love it. Rachizzle directed me here. w00t. :loves her like I love this: xoxo |