Keep going please! This is great. Just perfect. They affection
is so innocent with the upbringing but so sinful in the end it's
almost unbearable. So cute.

i liked this , alot.

Wow. Very, very, well written I must say. Great job. I'm glad it's not another one of those teacher- student relationships *shudders*, but rather another twisted relationship story. I liked it and could almost feel the tension myself. Once again, excellent job.

~Kat

This was nicely written and quite interesting. I could feel the tension between the Lukas and Lily as they tried to keep their relationship under wraps from the rest of the family at the dining table. It would nice if you could continue on with the story. Great job!

Very nicely written. That must be aweful...having that secret. But the thought of incest to me is ... eww. But very well depicted :o) Keep it up!

I have absolutely nothing bad to say about this except that there's no more... please tell me you're going to update it? :D