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| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-10-04 ch 1,   | >.< ouch. I'm sorry...i hope everything works out.nice job on expressing yourself-sometimes its good to know you can.--pammy--x3 |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-08-25 ch 1, | ('andi'llalwaysbehereandi'llalwaysbehere') l.o.v.e that line. I'm really sorry about you're brother. I've sorta got the same with my sister at tho mo, only i dont think its as serious. :-/ alot of feeling in this poem, i like the way the last line is sorta lingering even though the poem is finished. Keep writing |
| by His blood 2006-08-17 ch 1, | i'm so, so sorry that this is happening to you. ♥ this poem is incredibly raw and beautiful, so powerful and i loved it, but i hope everything works out. you shouldn't have to deal with something like this, and i really do hope that it turns out okay. these aren't empty words -- i don't really know what to say in a review, but i really am sorry. |
| HauntedMisery 2006-08-16 ch 1, | I'm so sorry this is happening to you *gives friendly hug* this is raw and beautiful, i love it, excellent work |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2006-08-15 ch 1, | wow, so powerful and the a/n at the end explains it all so well...im sorry for wot ur going thru, but this was a wonderful piece. Keep it up^_^ Thanks 4 da review...! |
| summerbee 2006-08-15 ch 1, | god. i'm really sorry about your brother. i just...these situations always make me awkward, and it's hard for me to say it properly, but i really do hope he gets better. the poem- it hits hard. very emotional, and raw. |
| Countess Chocula 2006-08-14 ch 1, | Sorry about your brother. I went through a similar thing with my cousin and...it just plain sucks. Anyway, great job on the poem. I loved your use of bolds and italics. Just alltogether great. |
| Hidden Lies 2006-08-14 ch 1, | Hope everything goes well for your brother! It clearly has affected you a lot. *hugs* Good Luck, I love the poem as well, very emotional! |
| Cloaked-n-shadow 2006-08-12 ch 1, | wow, that was really good. i'm really sorry about your brother |