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briannathewriter 2007-03-30 . chapter 1
That was a nice little thing to read. I enjoyed it greatly because you've written all of this very well in a good writing style. You're a pretty talented writer.
cbprice25 2006-08-13 . chapter 1
Aw.
McQuinn 2006-08-12 . chapter 1
Cute and simple. The word-association thing is very thought provoking. One thing, though: Why specifically with a sShaman? Can't this be done with any person? What's the significance of the shaman?

Of course, these questions only apply if this is a one-shot story. If it's not, I'm assuming the shaman will come in later, correct? Well, in any event, I liked this. If it's a multiple chaptered story, I'd love to see an update soon.

Great job, and keep it up.

-McQuinn
Stanton 2006-08-12 . chapter 1
This was an intense thought prevoking piece with I will love for the remainder of my life.
Terrence 'Mace' Mason 2006-08-12 . chapter 1
It is cute yet the innocence strikes me because of how simplistic you can make a complicated subject
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