 McQuinn 2006-08-12 . chapter 1Cute and simple. The word-association thing is very thought provoking. One thing, though: Why specifically with a sShaman? Can't this be done with any person? What's the significance of the shaman?
Of course, these questions only apply if this is a one-shot story. If it's not, I'm assuming the shaman will come in later, correct? Well, in any event, I liked this. If it's a multiple chaptered story, I'd love to see an update soon.
Great job, and keep it up.
-McQuinn |