Very funny! Just wondering, what is this a parody of? If you're willing to divulge that information...

That... was... brilliant. =D

You kept me laughing the whole way through. Well done.

I particularly loved the protagonist's (is she really?) name and the ending paragraph.

This is pretty funny
(I have no idea what the actual story is jut saying)

Goodness, I haven't been this amused by a story in quite some time! Quest(TM) is spot-on; I love the ridiculous Sues and Stus. Though the horrifying part is knowing that there are actual published characters like them -- it's what drove me from the fantasy genre in the first place (though, several years later, I'm tentatively peering back in. We'll see how it goes).

I do hope we'll someday find out what happened to poor Nodamuo. She's been missing for entirely too many chapters!

Oh my. I laughed so hard...XD

You're doing great with these stories. I'm really enjoying them.

Wow. Great parody! I'm ashamed to admit how much Diarrhoea reminded me of my first character, Crystal. I just wish someone would've told me how bad it was. They were all, like, "Wow, this is really good!" And I was just so proud of it...ug, I'm glad people like you are around to be brutally honest about stories. It really helps.

Anyway, enough of my ranting. Onto chapter 2...

HA i loved them all so far! Its more then just a parody, but a welcomed slap in the face to all the poorly written fantasys that focus more on "Adventure" then actual interesting plotlines.

I myself, admitedly, find myself enjoying Eragon, but I just ignore some of the more annoying things.

LOL we need to suggest these storys to some authors! Word needs to get out!

ahhahahaha

Nice! I really liked this, great job!

Hilarious!
You're great...really

My gosh, I cacked myself. That was hilarious and strangely, I feel like I've read something like this before, only it wasn't a parody.

You quote Limaayel's work verbatim a lot. Is this on purpose? Because if it is, you should at least check to make sure it's okay with her. :P

Nevertheless, I shall favorite this. Witty, clever, and strangely compelling since it's an actual story. I tip my hat to you, good sir.

Um...was the kimchi part supposed to be real, as in NOT Sue'd? As in, it was supposed to be part of the whole Japanese deal? I'd really appreciate it if you'd answer this question...

konban wa

Eh, I don't really like this all that much. I can see how what you're writing is humor, but this sort - dumb humor - I don't really like. Mine is more along the lines of sarcasm or irony. *shrug* Ask me why I'm reading, though; I'll have no answer. Though I don't really like the humor, somehow I still haven't exited. :P I'm a strange one.

*chuckles* Definitely have to agree with you on the whole Paolini front. Well, based on this chapter, I assume you hate him and his work. *rolls eyes* Plagiarizing from the greats.

Hm, any suggestions on what I should read?

Ha det
-Shan-

I love it, so much! I want to read the rest of this ASAP! (The only reason I'm reviewing now instead of when I finish is because it's rather late here and I'm tired, but wanted you to know that one more person thought this work was FANTASTIC!)
I adore the Quests(TM) company, and Captain Cliche and everything!
I'd like to let you know, as well- I'm glad I'm reading this now instead of after I (hopefully) finish the novel I'm writing, because I've already put down in my notes a couple of things that I hadn't even really thought about yet. (I'm not to that part in the book yet, you know?) But, thanks to you, there will be no ridiculous Majeek ; ) in my story, nor amazing!untrained!expertise with weapons!
You are doing a great service to the community at large : D

Ah, this one strikes home! (I'm a bit of an anime/manga freak, so...ha ha, I know what you're talking about...) Great job with describing the ridiculousness of anime reactions (like the tears, the sweatdrops, etc.). I like how you did research on this one--and I didn't know that about ninjas...though now that I think about it, it's painfully obvious...thanks for the information! Anyway, nice job!