I think I said it earlier-poor Dan! Update! Update! More! More!Evil!

I love your story, and I love your characters. Your story would be even better if you kept things reasonable. I am not trying to be a nitpicker, I could never write like you do. My stories suck. It's just that a lot of things that happen in this story I couldn't see happening. Firstly, it was Patience beating Dan up. And now you have said that somebody tried to drown Patience in Gym class? Maybe I just don't understand, but that seems impossible!

I love this story!!

omg! i thought dan was a NICE guy!

Poor man he never stood a chance..so sad. I love this story. Evil!

He's in trouble! yes he's in trouble! love it keep writing !

Dude! Sorry it took me a while to read it, but damn! His siblings are scary! Almost as scary as mine. . .lol Can't wait for the next chapter!!

I just read ALL your chapters and I LOVE this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! Screw college. lol...I think you said something about college. But don't worry, college is important. I have two older brothers. I get it. heh. UPDATE SOON!

Very good. Some things seems a little trite, but I can tell that you've put a lot of work into it and you have done a good job! I will keep reading.

SUCH a good start! I'll keep reading!

Wow, its really good... You really gave the charecters good personality. Awesome job

Yay. An update. Awesome story. Keep writing.

Very nice! Coniving little sisters! Hehe, this should be interesting. . .

sorry i didnt review before but keep going!

Another good chapter, instead of the bitchy thing and being cold and distant, everything about Patience reminds me of me. I'll have to finish reading this tomorow, when it's not so late. but your story has entered into my favorites.