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| Elizabeth07 2008-01-04 ch 21,  | abuseI did like your story, but, I would like to say that sometimes it was hard to follow, for when you had more than one character in the room, you did not say who was talking, and it confused me somewhat.. Other than that, this story is rather good. And, I loved the ending, it was so sweet, it brought tears to my eyes. It was definitely worth my time to read. |
| Kar3b3ar 2007-02-11 ch 21, | abuseaw...that really made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :D sweetest story i've read. keep on writing |
| fox of the night 2007-02-11 ch 21, | abusehey, i love this story, i've been reading it from time to time whenever i had time so i'm not sure if i ever got to the point of reviewing it but i decided i'd review at least the last chapter. anywho i loved the scrapbook part, that was so sweet. i'm so glad they finally got back together. anywho good job |
| guess who 2007-02-06 ch 21, anon. | abusehaha... its 12.21 in the morning!! i actually studied unlike yesterday! anyway, loved your story! it was so cute and nakakakilig...haha...see yah tomorrow! |
| hehe 2007-02-06 ch 14, anon. | abusetan chick!! its so sweet! |
| a little girl 2007-02-06 ch 21, | abuseGREAT! STORY! hahaha... zeph and jamie are so sweet! i swear! hahah C: |
| Happy Mooing Octopus 2007-02-04 ch 21, | abuseoh fish. it's done.. just like that?! hahaha i'm kidding. awesome:] real sweet chap. real nice ending. but, for some reason, it felt quite rushed... even if it doesn't seem so rushed... O_O maybe it's just me. it was great anyway:] SUPAH great. *gasp* i was gonna end mine with christmas too!!.. oh well... ...more. i. want. more. |
| psychotic aiba lover 2007-02-03 ch 21, | abuseyeah!! it was so touching! overall, i love this story and i will always love it! its so sweet! and i love zeph still... i enjoyed reading it so much! :) |
| an emo goth 2007-02-03 ch 21, | abuseAw... I like your ending its a happy one :) super nice... Good Job hehehe |
| udontknowme22 2007-02-02 ch 21, anon. | abuseomg!!the last chapter was the very best! it was so cool! i'm so glad they got back 2gether again! please make more romance stories! |
| green cupcake 2007-02-02 ch 21, | abuseaw thanx 4 the special mention! i loved this story hehe so r u or r u not writing a sequel?? PLEASE DO IM BEGGING YOU! lol anyways congrats on finishing ur a awesome writer!! |
| LilsurferSango17 2007-02-02 ch 21, | abuseWhat a sweet ending. Yay! I got a mention. You most def. did amazingly good on this story. (And I couldnt give a ** about my grammer right now.) But I'm sad to see it end. Maybe you'll write another story (not necessarily a sequel) someday. |
| pixxidust 2007-02-02 ch 21, | abusebeautiful story. um, there's nothing else really to describe it. it was really good. great work! |
| Happy Mooing Octopus 2007-01-23 ch 20, | abusecool. they love each other again!^^ wahahaha i'd say that it's great.. but you're ending it already..:[ so fast... even if you have long chaps... anyway--it was great^^ and i'm expecting a good ending!! do not disappoint meh.. hehe holy fish. SOMEONE stole my gmo! *looks down at your other reviewers* |
| gmo? 2007-01-23 ch 8, anon. | abuseaw...their relationships all messed up here... i feel frustrated. make them go together already! ill read through everything!! :D |