I certainly enjoyed reading this one. It was odd and endearing. Nicely done.

I love how Lucinda makes him question himself to the point where he's so confused that she has no trouble stealing his wallet-brilliant one-shot ]

I like it. Lucinda reminds me of my friend.

it's cute!

and incredibly funny

i love that she snagged his wallet

This was funny. Good job.

Oh wow, this was SO fun to read. No, really. I just loved it... it left me speechless, dammit! So you should be honoured I actually reviewed before favoriting. Actually, you shouldn't be. I always do it. Manners, see. Or should I say respect? Maybe It's just my way of being nice, who knows.

This is crazy awesome!

HAHA, I loved it, the irony of it all it was very entertaining, I especially love Lucinda.

Brilliant! Absolutely :p

It's witty and I like it.

bahahaa!

omg i lovedd this!

it was soo greatt!

That was a great story! I laughed at the end, very unexpected and clever! :)

Hey, this ia an awesome story. well-written and a great story.

I loved the way you showed that the stereotypical first inpressions henry had of lucinda were so wrong. first impressions arent always right.

Loved it!

Haelo ;p

Brilliant. I loved it! Lucinda was a great character. I could picture them both really well, but especially her. You did a great job. I loved the characters and really everything about it. It's a shame it's not longer, but it would be a different turn for the story.

Great ending. Made me laugh. Write more.

That was brilliant! She shakes him up, makes him question himself, and then she robs him blind! Most excellent woman, I loved it.

Ollie May

Nicely done. Elements of 'Derailed', but clever. Loved the mini-twist.