So cute. Absolutely love it!

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Lovely story you got. :D

I really enjoyed reading it. While I was reading it, it felt as if I really was reading a book. Haha, nice. I love how you created your characters.


-Lyia.

x3 *Mu !*

I err... have issues finding rational sentences with that enormous grim you pastered on my face.
I knew I would Love James and Melanie - and the Duke...somehow - it was was neat. Neat neat neat. Still I still think you are better at beguining than closures. :P

You can take out the author's note. This is a very cute entertaining one shot - especially after reading Petals. It's nice to see what happens with Melanie.
There is nothing wrong with it and the author's note is unnecessary.

I'm usually not for one shots but that was highly entertaining!

Hehe so we see how the other Bradford sister got her man.^^ Well she is right like her sister those girls don´t wait for their man the go and get ´em. Both are unconventional for their time. The end is fitting for her. I really liked the scene where he tries out different speeches. The unfortunate seduction scene was good also,very funny to read. so they have been kissing quite often...well, well^^. The scene with James and Albinson is soo funny...well written i had a good laugh over this scene.

I loved this! While not totally historically correct, the Regency setting was well executed and I loved the characters. Great job!

This story of your was incredibly sweet.

Mellie loved James so much and she was strong and brave enough to go out and try and get it herself, even though at times it was a huge disaster.

James was adorable if a little clueless at times but I think that's what's so endearing about him.

I loved this story especially as now all three friends have their happy ending and are *shock horror* married off!

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I loved this! Melanie is one heck of a character! :)) I really enjoyed this even though it's very short and made me long for more. :)

LOL go melanie!

I really like it. wow i read your other story, Petals and i loved that especially since my exams had recently finished and i was exremely bored, someone had recommended that story to me. I really like it.

This story Has a nice start to it, and i supose it won't follow the traditional romance, especially since, he was being a bit of a wimp and she had to propose to him. i like the intro can't wait for the development.

haha. so funny!

This was such a comedy! Hahaha...I loved it! Another success for you!

That was cute lol
I liked it

Awh!

Love,
Becca