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| micky123 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseI really like it. wow i read your other story, Petals and i loved that especially since my exams had recently finished and i was exremely bored, someone had recommended that story to me. I really like it. This story Has a nice start to it, and i supose it won't follow the traditional romance, especially since, he was being a bit of a wimp and she had to propose to him. i like the intro can't wait for the development. |
| Hazelnut-Romance 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abusehaha. so funny! |
| anitsirK 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was such a comedy! Hahaha...I loved it! Another success for you! |
| Meg 2008-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was cute lol I liked it |
| HelloLovely 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseAwh! Love, Becca |
| RoseLife 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abusenaww very cute! xD well done |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseAdorable story. Nice work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| NomadicWriter 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abusei thought this was hilarious as well. Even though it was a short one i think you did a great job with it and i love it! -K |
| stalking meadow 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely lovely! I loved it from the beginning to the very end, though my favorite part would have to be the one in Albinson's house. It was rather funny, too. Great work! |
| sealednectar 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseAdorable. Why was Jack there at the beginning? Wasn't he one of the conditions in Petals? Great read! |
| Rory Gilroy 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseanother GREAT one. gosh, your stories are SO thrilling! |
| atreyu love 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOMG REMINDS ME OF TRUE LIES :] |
| gulistanlik 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuse*laughs* Who knew Melanie could be so crazy? haha. I loved every bit of it. It was really lovely and I was sighing the whole time. Nice and fluffy towards the end. And rather funny the whole thing is, :D Keep up the good work! Gulistanlik |
| 5starmom 2007-03-31 ch 1, | abuseI loved the story! It was a great short read! AWE!! ;) |
| Treblesome Kylie 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely lovely! Oh, this was just absolutely wonderful! The characters were well developed for a one shot and they were easy to relate to. The plot was fantastic and the themes were handled wisely...I absolutely love it! *Cheers* |