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| LaChelle 2008-06-05 ch 16, anon. | abuseI luff it! I luff your writing! i luff you! =] haha... sorry I get obbsesive, but i try to hide it =P I did really like it though. The plot was good and well developed! =[ I really sad its over... T.T T.T I hope you write some more! I would love to read it! Anotyhe story or whatever, you could become a professional writer if you slowed down bit and gave it more meat! Searious!! not trying to be mean! just constructive! It was really good and with a few trick of the trade, you could be one Hellacious writer~ Anyways thanks for writing it, I really enjoyed it~ |
| lovefordemons 2008-02-28 ch 17,  | abuseI dont know where to start... IT WAS SO GOOD! All of it! I truely wish to read every other thing you have written now. It was so sad, and yet so funny all at the same time. Please write more stories in the future! |
| Pyjamapants 2007-10-16 ch 16, | abusewhat a nice way to finish this story :) |
| Miki 2007-10-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseSo hot! I think you are doing a good job from a writers point of view. |
| Scribbles Go On Forever 2007-10-04 ch 16, | abuseOMG I LOVE! BIG HUGS! So is Rebecca an angel? I love this story, it's so sweet and sad and happy. I loves x |
| kylesanchez 2007-09-30 ch 16, anon. | abuseOMG THAT IS THE BEST ENDING EVER! |
| Hane ga nai 2007-07-01 ch 16, | abuseWOW. This is getting so good! You must continue!! I gotta know what happens next! |
| t.k. kirchoff 2007-04-25 ch 15, | abusewow i really liked it. it filled me with longing for love as strong as that. i really liked the idea and i usually hate fantasy. this is excellent. :] |
| Amindaya 2007-04-10 ch 7, | abuseGeez, I don't blame the poor guy for his reaction. |
| Amindaya 2007-04-10 ch 5, | abuseWhoa, that was..unexpected. |
| Amindaya 2007-04-10 ch 3, | abuseYeah, way too suspicious. |
| Amindaya 2007-04-10 ch 2, | abuseTeachers are evil. |
| Amindaya 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseHaha, I really /don't/ know you, so your secret is safe. Yikes, Daray is confusing. Hopefully Halen figures him out soon. *wink* Well, I'm off to read more! |
| MysseZ 2007-03-20 ch 16, | abusewill there be more to the story? |
| Pyjamapants 2007-03-18 ch 15, | abuseBrilliant. You write really well and (despite a few typos etc.) make this a great read. well done. |