what a powerful peice!! this was simply gorgeous!!

"Dream with me

As if it could be real"

those lines were beautiful. I'm still not intirely sure what this poem is about, it's one of those that you have to read a few times to really understand it.

I love it ^^

Great poem, I particularly like the lines "Walk beloved or just sit by my side". I didn't quite understand the last line though, is she asking him/her if they love her or doesn't she know if they're there any more?

So very sweet, it makes me sentimental. ^_^ Your imagery-half a heart-very well placed. I especially enjoyed that.

Great writing! Keep it up! ^_^