Oh gosh ;_; This is beautiful too. I usually hate the whole cliche "If you love someone, you'll let them go" thing, and how that ALWAYS uses a butterfly in some way. Here, the last verse/blurb still brings that image to mind, complete with the butterfly, but the way you worded it is so gorgeous that I can't not like it. XD I like how you started each verse with a line in bold. You did a great job!

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this stirs up a great sense of imagery in my mind...it's beautiful, but forlorn the sounds of pleading...intoxication.

there's something really special hidden in each line that just...it's so hard to explain but i love it. really good :)

Great rhythm.