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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-17 ch 1,   | Interesting perspective. |
| hanfiddle 2006-08-14 ch 1, | I liek the way you build a haiku: one sentence thoughout. It could benefit from something relating it to an outward event, or a break (which does not need break the sentence). Keep writing. |