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C. F. Handle 2006-08-21 . chapter 1
But isn't all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? xD I like poe.

Anyhow, this particular topic is very interesting. The eyes and ears are simply receptors of pure energy while our brain manipulates and interprets everything.

Perhaps if you understood the greed and hatred within yourself you could escape the harsh climate of society.
Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-17 . chapter 1
Powerful and true.
Moondog Dozier 2006-08-15 . chapter 1
True, and sad example of modern social reality. Good haiku.
hanfiddle 2006-08-15 . chapter 1
My suggestion: add one more sense...
Halcyon Impulsion 2006-08-13 . chapter 1
A stark and pain-filled piece. Nice work.
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