 Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-17 . chapter 1Poor other birds - they are sweet too! ;) |
 andfound815 2006-08-14 . chapter 1I really like this. Wonderful imagery here. World, take notice! Forgotten Maiden (nice name, btw) shall be forgotten no longer!
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R&R my novel EARTHSTONES, please! |
 Dale Christopher 2006-08-14 . chapter 1Beautiful, a worthy haiku. I like the word use here, its simple and so effective.
Daze |
 hanfiddle 2006-08-14 . chapter 1Beautiful |
 Moondog Dozier 2006-08-13 . chapter 1Very audible. I like the sound in this. Very well written haiku. |
 Halcyon Impulsion 2006-08-13 . chapter 1And yet, she continues to sing. This has a lot to think about when you consider it. Nice language, good work. |