|Reviews for That is, if you read this|
| EyesEmphatic 5/31/07 . chapter 1
People always TRY to write poems that will affect its readers, yet no one will ever come out and say that that's what they're trying to do. Good on you.
| realityescapesher 10/30/06 . chapter 1
simplistic and gorgeous. i would copy and paste what i like... but it would be the entire poem. however, i'm especially fond of "and shake out mean words that rattle your chest."
| citrus scented 8/23/06 . chapter 1
oh. wow. this is so beautiful. so simply put, but powerful images and choice of words. "and shake out mean words that rattle your chest." beautiful.
| x account closed x 8/19/06 . chapter 1
So do I.
And trust me, you do.
| Faithless Juliet 8/14/06 . chapter 1
A baby Chandra creation - I like it, I feel the same way. I think poetry is very fast, unlike novels the whole plot and meaning is jam-packed into a smaller scope and it should envelope the reader - make them see, make them understand, put them in that position, make them swell and dream with you. Keep up the good work, and for goodness sake don't go so long between updates my'dear.
| tamarkaph2006 8/13/06 . chapter 1
Cool, simple and honest.
| diffident 8/13/06 . chapter 1
My mouth is waning, my chest is shaking, and I'm full. This is absolutely wonderful.