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| waterdragon719 2006-12-01 ch 3,   | I feel so sorry for poor Lisa...I think Jessi needs to get more info about vampires before she goes out to try and kill her friend. Honestly... Good story, but try adding a little more description in some spots. Otherwise, I'm hooked! Keep writing! |
| Adakua 2006-10-05 ch 3, | This is awesome, I'm going to post this story in public to get other people to read this. This is awesome. Keep it up. Not much to say, though the paragraphs are alittle too big. Please continue soon. till next time adaku-chan |
| Adakua 2006-10-05 ch 2, | Ok, ok so the vampire and the vampire hunter are switching places and talking about themsleves each time. Uh, why did you have to read Spirit Spell, I atcully wanted you to read this new story I working on soon. I'll probably won't even look back at it. Sorry. Oh, great chapter--on to the next. - Till next time adaku-chan |
| Adakua 2006-10-05 ch 1, | Hey, thanks for the review-I didn't know you would like my story that much. Enough of that- about this story now. So it's about 'Vampires'. I like vampires-that are the good guys. So the vampire (not the hunter) is the on talking. This is really good so far. But, could you please split some of the huge paragraphs into smaller ones. Also her BEST Friend is the vampire hunter. That sucks. Oh, my name is Jessica, wow. Alright on to reading chapter 2. Till next time adaku-chan |
| Vampyre-Kin 2006-09-12 ch 3, | I love it! Keep up the good work.This is Ellie, by the way. |