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| silentscreamer07 2006-09-16 ch 1,  | abuseOh, wow, this is a really great poem, yet again. I'll be honest, I've never been in love before, so I probably can't relate to this in my own personal life. But the way you bring the words alive, and the emotion forth, you can sense what it's like, in a way. I'm not sure if that makes sense? hehe, I hope it does. Although, I guess, in a small sense this doesn't have to only apply to the fact of being "in love" with someone, but just loving someone. Everyone has friends and family they cheris, and we all want "someone to lean on; someone to talk to" So, in a sense I guess I could relate. :D Lovely job. *keep writing* I liked this ~britney |
| the-foresight 2006-09-16 ch 1, | abuseYou don't need to be in love to relate to this I think. You really bring forth the atmosphere in this, and it has a timeless message that we all can understand. Good work. |
| Isabella22 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh this is beautiful! Would you mind if I used this in a fanfiction, as long as I gave you credit? It's a Harry Potter fanfiction. Lol, do you like Harry Potter? ANyways, get back to me. lol. AWESOME poem. Very emotional and beautiful. |