 mess of a dreamer 2009-11-08 . chapter 1I love it :) So cute. |
 theaddictedfighter 2009-08-06 . chapter 1Incredibly cute. I adored it. :D It's not everyday you find a romance story bloom from Blockbuster. :D I love both the characters; they're perfect in their own little way, honest to orange polka dots. I like Ryan's nervousness; it's quite endearing. And Lynne is portrayed really well, like your typical American teenager with a great personality. I always liked movies. :D |
 guitar.fingers 2009-05-25 . chapter 1wow , =3 old school but it still makes my |
 HelloLovely 2009-04-21 . chapter 1This was so good. I really liked that it was from the guy's POV. I think you did amazing with it. I mean, I don't know if you're a guy or not, but a lot of the time when I read things from a guy's POV, it seems girly to me, and maybe guys really are girly, but just act tough? But I liked this because I mean, his thought process was a lot like how some of my guy friends and my ex boyfriend talks, so it made it really realistic.
Love,
Becca |
 Terminator 2009-01-27 . chapter 1 God, I loved that! I ** loved that! And I love you too, for coming up with that. YOu rock! |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-01-04 . chapter 1This was such a good one-shot..really sweet. I don't think you should change it into a full length story. It would take away from the magic. Lynne and Ryan have their perfect story here. It doesn't really need more. :) |
 gulistanlik 2008-09-24 . chapter 1I love this. But why is this so different from other 'similar' one-shots, that it made me favourite it? I really like how you've managed to capture the epitome of obsessions/infatuation/love. He knows her so well, linking them both through something we take for granted yet means much more (movies).
Great work and thank you for a wonderful fic!
gulistanlik |
 Ebony Glasse 2008-09-14 . chapter 1aw... so sweet!! loved it!! XD |
 caelynne 2008-08-29 . chapter 1Aw, this is so incredibly sweet - maybe the Iris (by the Goo Goo Dolls) playing in the background gave an extra effect on the ending as well. Haha, I think you should keep this as a one-shot, its a good change for one-shots to not have that kiss ending between strangers, pretty much, so I guess I really liked this.
And also, throughout the story, I was just thinking to myself: Wow, what a stalker! How creepy, huh?
Haha, anyway, I'll look forward to reading some of your other stories. Thumbs up from me ;) |
 Pop the Bubble 2008-08-17 . chapter 1Hahahahahahha!
That was so cute!
kudos to you! |
 Jenc11 2008-08-16 . chapter 1I don't know why, but I really like this one-shot. Even though it said my name was boring (Jenny)... Haha. :P Don't worry, no offense taken. |
 righthere431 2008-08-07 . chapter 1wow really good story =] |
 JamieBell 2008-07-31 . chapter 1I completely adored that. Everything was just perfect, situations, characterization, the whole agony of unrequited love (at least in his mind). Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! |
 Killer Instincts 2008-07-13 . chapter 1Wow, I absolutely loved this. I actually worked at Blockbuster for a year and a half, so when I was reading this all that came to mind was: OMG I've done that, and that, and yeah...I did that too. Lol, It has to be one of the best One shots I've come across. ^__^ |
 Hop Skip Jump 2008-06-24 . chapter 1Great writing and cute ending : ) |