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mess of a dreamer 2009-11-08 . chapter 1
I love it :) So cute.
theaddictedfighter 2009-08-06 . chapter 1
Incredibly cute. I adored it. :D It's not everyday you find a romance story bloom from Blockbuster. :D I love both the characters; they're perfect in their own little way, honest to orange polka dots. I like Ryan's nervousness; it's quite endearing. And Lynne is portrayed really well, like your typical American teenager with a great personality. I always liked movies. :D
guitar.fingers 2009-05-25 . chapter 1
wow , =3 old school but it still makes my
HelloLovely 2009-04-21 . chapter 1
This was so good. I really liked that it was from the guy's POV. I think you did amazing with it. I mean, I don't know if you're a guy or not, but a lot of the time when I read things from a guy's POV, it seems girly to me, and maybe guys really are girly, but just act tough? But I liked this because I mean, his thought process was a lot like how some of my guy friends and my ex boyfriend talks, so it made it really realistic.

Love,
Becca
Terminator 2009-01-27 . chapter 1
God, I loved that! I ** loved that! And I love you too, for coming up with that. YOu rock!
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-01-04 . chapter 1
This was such a good one-shot..really sweet. I don't think you should change it into a full length story. It would take away from the magic. Lynne and Ryan have their perfect story here. It doesn't really need more. :)
gulistanlik 2008-09-24 . chapter 1
I love this. But why is this so different from other 'similar' one-shots, that it made me favourite it? I really like how you've managed to capture the epitome of obsessions/infatuation/love. He knows her so well, linking them both through something we take for granted yet means much more (movies).

Great work and thank you for a wonderful fic!

gulistanlik
Ebony Glasse 2008-09-14 . chapter 1
aw... so sweet!! loved it!! XD
caelynne 2008-08-29 . chapter 1
Aw, this is so incredibly sweet - maybe the Iris (by the Goo Goo Dolls) playing in the background gave an extra effect on the ending as well. Haha, I think you should keep this as a one-shot, its a good change for one-shots to not have that kiss ending between strangers, pretty much, so I guess I really liked this.

And also, throughout the story, I was just thinking to myself: Wow, what a stalker! How creepy, huh?

Haha, anyway, I'll look forward to reading some of your other stories. Thumbs up from me ;)
Pop the Bubble 2008-08-17 . chapter 1
Hahahahahahha!

That was so cute!

kudos to you!
Jenc11 2008-08-16 . chapter 1
I don't know why, but I really like this one-shot. Even though it said my name was boring (Jenny)... Haha. :P Don't worry, no offense taken.
righthere431 2008-08-07 . chapter 1
wow really good story =]
JamieBell 2008-07-31 . chapter 1
I completely adored that. Everything was just perfect, situations, characterization, the whole agony of unrequited love (at least in his mind). Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful!
Killer Instincts 2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Wow, I absolutely loved this. I actually worked at Blockbuster for a year and a half, so when I was reading this all that came to mind was: OMG I've done that, and that, and yeah...I did that too. Lol, It has to be one of the best One shots I've come across. ^__^
Hop Skip Jump 2008-06-24 . chapter 1
Great writing and cute ending : )
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