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| eshlie 2008-08-28 ch 1,  | abusei sang. |
| thursdays and rain 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abusedamn, you are good.. *adds to faves |
| Evil Zipper 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuse*tears up* nice title. :) |
| Perfect Bliss 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseYou are one of my favorite writers out there and I admire you very much. I want to write like you. |
| Rina-Lyn Bae 2006-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI like it. I love the imagery and just the whole idea. Gorgeously done. And it has a rhyme scheme (rhyming impresses me, I can't manage it). Very well done. ~~RLB |
| TeaWithOnions 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseWow... just wow... The rhythm is just so perfect and well I just love everything about this. The ending sent a shiver up my spine. This is going on my favorites. Wonderful job. |
| TheNewUnderground 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseThis has the perfect balance of emotion and cold hard truth. You express so many different things - for lack of a better word - but it is -so- well executed, so the reader isn't left wondering "Hmm, I wonder what that means." At the same time though, there's plenty still unsaid that adds to it a great deal...well I could go on and on about this but the bottom line is that I think it's wonderful. Definitely a favorite :) |
| stuck here waiting 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abusewowza, i can definetly feel tthe meotion in this one. but something good has to be happening if you're willing to give up new york for someone, just be sure of what you're doing, ok? i absolutely love the last stanza, the flow, the almost rhyme but not, is b-e-a-utiful Callificent. |
| Prevaricate 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseabsolutely and stunningly beautiful. the only line I'm not in love with is this: "I prefer your stormy crush fed up voice" To me, it would make more sense to replace "crush" with some other adjective, maybe "rough" or "harsh". It just doesn't seem to fit. Either way, I love this. Fantastic word placement and rhythm. Very nice. |
| diffident 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseA soft-voiced confession. I love the blunt honesty in this. marie |