dude, loved the writing! I have something very similar to this work. It's called Truths of Life. I think you'd might like it. Keep up the good work!

Well, even though "what is life/what's the meaning of life?" isn't exactly an original idea (as you yourself seem to know), I love what you did with it. You have definiate natural writing talent, and I love the enthusiasm at parts of the poem ("Yes, yes, yes! They are all living!", that's my favorite part), something most of my poetry severely lacks. Keep it up!