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| Tee Elle Double Yew 2008-04-05 ch 11,  | abuseAh, The joy of angst! Good Job! |
| Fictatiousrambler 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseHehe i loved this! It was great! |
| Back of Beyond 2008-02-04 ch 11, | abuseGreat story, shame it's over. :[ |
| kylesanchez 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusei would love to beta-read for you. Puh-LEEZE! you are a genius! |
| kylesanchez 2008-01-21 ch 11, | abusewhat does chris do for a living...psychiatric bills, medicine, the doctor bills, and a new truck. i know there is insurance, but that is A LOT of money. just wondering. i might just have to do what he does. lol |
| maggiepyro101 2008-01-06 ch 11, | abuseok so when mike dies does Chris go crazy and think that mike it there but he's really not, and the whole "say goodbye to my mom" thing just mean that his mom is at his funeral (not dead) and he wants to see her one last time? OR do they bring Mike back to life and the mom was really the one who died at the funeral?...i hope you could understand that X_X |
| maggiepyro101 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseaw poor mike :( i don't know if it would be worse if "the girl" was someone he hated or someone he loved that died...the 'loved them and they died' thing might be worse but not by much. love the stary so far ^^ |
| enternally-dark90 2007-08-10 ch 12, | abusei really, really liked this story. i cried for poor chris and mike. they really do make a good couple. chris needed someone to love him and so did mike. glad mike's ** of a mom died and that evil mike is gone.you're a great writer, spelling didn't matter to me. |
| Limited Edition 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseYou have storytelling talent, I wanna beta-read for you. |
| fei-yen 2006-10-12 ch 12, anon. | abuseI was a slightly disappointed when "tough" Mike was suppressed. Heh. He grows on you. |
| Sakru angelqueen 2006-10-11 ch 11, | abuseI like the ending, good chapter! |
| PoeticRagdoll 2006-10-06 ch 10, | abuseSo this was a good story... I was sitting here reading the end and im like no he cant die n then all of a sudden im like who the hell is this boy talking to him! I love the end I thought you were going to kill mike off not his mom -dances happy dance- |
| FyreFaerie14 2006-10-01 ch 10, | abuseyay! happy ending. you seriously scared the ** out of me when i thought that Mike died in the hospital. yay! bruised is finished! eagerly awaiting the prologue...with another yaoi scene? *hopeful* |
| Sadistic-wolf 2006-08-23 ch 3, | abuseaw thats sad, and cute in the same breath, but not for the same reasons ~Night-wolf/Sadistic-wolf =^.~= |
| Sadistic-wolf 2006-08-23 ch 2, | abusehehe short chapter but really good ~Night-wolf/Sadistic-wolf =^.~= |